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Friday Submission. This week was terrible.

I like drawing on paper better, but I am having problems scanning them. The sketch book is a bit longer than what scanner can scan (so the bottom is chopped off) also the spirals cause the shading on the left. It's a rather unfortunate tradeoff.

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:iconcute-budgie:
Cute-budgie Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
죽으세요
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:icondeviantyoungarter:
deviantYOUNGARTER Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
who is that girl?
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:icondastalkerperson:
DAStalkerPerson Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconepiccryplz: No....no it can't be finished. *Crais* 
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:iconmidnyte-wolff:
Midnyte-Wolff Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can not wait for the next page!

I have been a fan of kai for a long time! I watched you on my old account and am doing so on my new one. Kai is the cutest thing I have ever had the pleasure of seeing. Keep up the awesome work.
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
It's going to be almost a year since I posted T T
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:iconmidnyte-wolff:
Midnyte-Wolff Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! LOLZ That's a long time. I do hope you finish it though. It is fantastic so far.
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:iconhnkkorgris:
hnkkorgris Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wait shouldn't this be page 11
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
*one year later * OOPS...
Maybe ...it's a continuation of the original page 10. haha. 
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:iconehx-kor:
EhX-KoR Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student General Artist
thats what i was just about to say XD
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:iconcheow12:
Cheow12 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Woah!, it's getting good!
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:icondynamo5:
dynamo5 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist
Heyyyy, I rather like the scanner effect on this page! It makes the hand on the third panel more creepy and foreshortened (I don't know if that's the right word for it) effect, haha |D
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
oh I didn't think about that. haha 
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:icongirlyrainbowvampire:
GirlyRainbowVampire Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my gosh this looks so awesome!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: I cannot wait for the next page :stare: :la: :la: :la:
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:iconsonicrox-888:
Sonicrox-888 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student
Totally agreed, I also love drawing on paper more, its why i hardly ever update ^^;
But my sketchbooks don't fit the scanner either. Maybe a government conspiracy!
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
Yeah it's really frustrating The sketchbooks have great paper quality unlike the average A4 paper
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:iconsonicrox-888:
Sonicrox-888 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student
yessssss, im currently saving up for a bigger scanner.
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:iconbellatwix5:
Bellatwix5 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, but man, you sure are dragging this one out. Is that on purpose 2 tease poor peepl like MichArtx3, or are u just making it up as you go.
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Drawing on sketchbook gives so much less space to draw lots of panels...
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:iconcyanzack:
CyanZack Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooh Fudgenutters
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:icondeadwrong777:
deadwrong777 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I really like the "thunk" part and how it reaches out of the panel. This is an awesome page and it reads really well.
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
Thank you (:
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:iconmichartx3:
MichArtx3 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
CANT YOU PUT UP THE PAGES A LITTLE BIT FASTER! I'M LIKE DYEING(<-- can't spell) EVERY TIME I REALIZE THAT I HAVE TO WAIT A WEEK UNTIL NEXT PAGE :iconnoooooplz:
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
:iconheplz:
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:icontissamendes:
Tissamendes Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student
KAI Y U NO HAVE HAYR??
:icony-u-noplz:
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
The darkness made it disappear
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:iconsorawarrior13:
SoraWarrior13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Ouch, that looked like it hurt for both of them >.o; I look forward to see what happens next ^^
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:icongothgirl-13:
gothgirl-13 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I think you made a mistake, shouldn't this be page 11?
I'm not sure though ^^;
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
yeah I realized that a bit after I posted it but I got too lazy to fix it. Will fix the deviation title lol
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:iconbogm0nst3r:
bogm0nst3r Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I can hardly wait! this is a suspenseful comic!
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:icontannaquil:
Tannaquil Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the way your paper drawings look, and I don't mind the shading on the left all that much. Great page, though. XD
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Maybe the shading isn't too bad, but it adds a bit of blur ):
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:iconcrazziikunoichii:
CrazziiKunoichii Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Awesome! Ouch for Rita though /falls/ fudge.
D.Amn xD
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:icon0meter:
0meter Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I didn't take a moment to look at this page when you handed it over for it to be scanned because you tend to not want people to look at your sketch book. But now that I am looking at this for real, I realize that this is a very dynamically composed page. With addition to the previous page, which gave out a "preview" of Rita's mighty swing, it's pretty cool to be able to see it again in a different angle. I can feel that a lot of force is involved, as well as space.

I was rather impressed with the leg twisting panel. The movement is subtle but I understood exactly what happened, haha. Now that Rita is down SHE WILL DIE.

Also, did you have some trouble removing the dark shade on the left? I thought you might dodge-tool that away or something. Or maybe you left it there on purpose. For some reason, the dark fade-y shade does some creepy job for the very first panel; it's a figure looking straight at you but the fading shade suggest it slowly moving.

Anyway, getting pretty curious how this will unfold!
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
I really appreciate your feedback. It's encouraging to keep on making the pages, I just wish I made more on timely basis. It's almost been a year; but I think I was mostly unsure about
how the next page goes, even though the page already has a lot of excitement and goodies going on. I felt that a lot of my pages are a bit stalling (the whole page takes up only a short period 
of time in the story), not really sure how to improve on this. Maybe I just need practice

You have no freaking idea how many times I erased the panel for the feet movement LOL (because of the angling of the view, not only that, feet are just difficult to draw) 

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:iconstephaniescarlet:
stephaniescarlet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
hehe, that person was between her legs :iconhurrhurrplz:
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:iconniobesnuppa:
Niobesnuppa Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Nice! xD I've been looking forward to these.
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:iconemptyshadow:
EmptyShadow Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I wish I can post more faster lol
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:icondevilcat92:
Devilcat92 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This one just funny...
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:iconultimatesketchqueen:
UltimateSketchQueen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD Fudge
OhRita
Anyway. Eeeek, can't wait for next week ;3;
I also really love the dynamic of the second panel too!
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:iconzemmiaphobia:
Zemmiaphobia Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually, the shadow on the left doesn't look bad considering it's a shadowy scene.
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:iconjacob-cross:
Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Nice X3
"But what happens next?" X3
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:iconwolfylee:
WolfyLee Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
"Fudge"...goes so well xD
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:iconthesmiley6679:
thesmiley6679 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Damn you to hell balance...
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:iconangel-girl1:
angel-girl1 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
my brother would always do that foot move with me and i'm all "lasdagfsjal"
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